#152
April 27, 2012 § 13 Comments
Clouds
painting
pavement
like a
watercolor
Pollock
Soil
stained
streaky
by the
strokes of
sliding
raindrops
Authored Angioplasty
A Poem Project
April 27, 2012 § 13 Comments
Clouds
painting
pavement
like a
watercolor
Pollock
Soil
stained
streaky
by the
strokes of
sliding
raindrops
Authored Angioplasty 
Wonderful. I’m tempted to use expletives to further drive home how awesome this is, but I’ll leave it at “wonderful”. 🙂
Lol Ian – well thanks!
I love the comparison to Pollock, beautifully done. 🙂
You shine! 🙂 Wonderful poetic balance and imagery!
I like the juicy language of this – there aren’t many poems that get away with saying “pollock”. And yes, I do know it’s a fish, but the word always makes me smile… 😉
I was referring to the painter 🙂
Ooooooh! Of course you were! How stupid do I feel now! lol. Yesterday was a long day, but that’s no excuse. Many apologies for bringing white fish into your lovely poem Jessica! *blushing ferociously now*
Hey, poetry is poetry! If it felt like a fishy kind of day, then there you have it! 🙂
I’m sorry – I’m still laughing at my “Pollock” moment! Let not that detract from your delightful poem. I am but a British buffoon… 😉
This is a great poem! You are motivating me to post more of mine!
Yes I’ve seen “Blue Poles” (we are the same age). I think there may have been something “fishy” about Pollock. 🙂 Certainly your poem conjures up the right images – well written Jessica.
I love the watercolor Pollock and the vertical stance of the poem re rain. Nice work! 🙂
I’m so glad you posted.