A Poem Project
November 7, 2011 § 5 Comments
You have sandy
Tagged: Poem, Poetry
I love it.
Absolutely love the disjointed structure of the stanza. Single images that make up an atmospheric scene. Wonderful!
This is my favourite so far, nice economy of words and you really know how to use line breaks which is something I often struggle with, but yes! Good stuff man, keep it up and thanks for your comment
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